Murder, was how she wrote it

 

The review was mad

and it made her mad

and those who bought the story

kit and kaboodle were mad

because the media raised suspicions

of a mad writer

who really wasn't mad at all

except for the mere word choice

of a mad society of investors who built

the house of publication so that her father

would see just how mad she was and

revoke all privileges to her trust fund

until her mad boyfriend stopped sleeping with her

mother who was mad that her father was

caught sleeping with her boyfriend's sister and

murdered them all with arsenic when they entered

the M.A.D. abode separately and acted as if they didn't

know each other sitting right across the reviewer who would

write the review until she walked out of the home after she

revealed that she was actually the muse for her novel

Reviews

[alesuriko]

Interesting, rather clever as well. Certainly a good prose poem. You did really well in writing the sequence of events so that it wasn't confusing in the least. It kind of reminded me of O.J. Simpson's "If I Did It". Very entertaining to read for sure. I love the use of arsenic, I'm an Arsenic and Old Lace type of girl so it amused me. Well done.

[KaySea]

very strange, but i like it

[Gracie-San]

Oh, wow! Clever and strange. I very much liked it.

Although, there are one or two spelling errors such as "revolk" should be "revoke" and "priveledges" should be "priveleges".

Other than that it was very good. Hope I helped and thanks for a good read!

[Dianafit]

HA! Like it!