Help me if you can

 

All the things you taught me

Oh they are stuck in my mind

You told me just how things would be

Just give it time

 

I wanted to go my own way

Kind of be my own man

Now I don't know what to say

Please help me if you can

 

You know that I love you

And I always will

You know that I love you

Do you love me the same way too?

 

Got mixed up with people

Who I thought really cared

They never meant me any good

Oh how they laugh and stare

 

I gave them my all

Until I had nothing left to give

Couldn't wait for me to fall

What was my reason to live

 

I miss hearing your voice

The warm hug in your smile

I made a wrong choice

 - in this life

I hope that I'm still your child

 

I wanted to go my own way

Kind of be my own man

Now I don't know what to say

Please help me if you can

 

You know that I love you

And I always will

You know that I love you

Can you love me the way you used to?

 

It's so lonely

In a world full of strangers and thieves

Feels like the rain falls on me only

As I trample through the leaves

 

But you know that I love you

And I always will

Can I come back home, soon

While I have the chance to?

Reviews

[Dutch Jr.]

Word flow is the first thing I noticed when I read this; this poem has a catchy rhythm. And as Kit Kat said, lots of emotion being portrayed through this writing, great job.

[TTBoy28]

Many thanks!

[deeps]

WoW this is full of emotion, and so well written as well.
I enjoyed this write. Wonderful flow and rhyme scheme.