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A Poem by TTBoy28

 

 

Hearing the register register things

Adding amounts that interest brings

Total jokes to some and greed to others

Pitting rich brothers against poor lovers

Envying the display of the register

© 2010 TTBoy28


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What a nice, short poem. The "register register" works, but it's kind of distracting. Is "evying" supposed to be "envying?" in the last line?

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TTBoy28
TTBoy28

Atlanta, GA



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