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A Poem by TTBoy28

 

 

 

 

 

As you work

 

Others linger

 

And you keep believing

 

 That one day

 

 Some day

 

Hard work

 

 Will

 

Pay off

 

But others keep lingering and you

 

 Keep believing

 

 That one day

 

 Some day

 

You will get

 

And have

 

What you believed

 

 They lacked

 

Someone noticing

 

"a job well done"

© 2010 TTBoy28


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I do not know what to say but this is truth. This piece leaves the reader wanting more. Its as if you have left the reader in mid-air. This is an excellent technique! Really great technique here.

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Vincent

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TTBoy28
TTBoy28

Atlanta, GA



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