Bittersweet

A Poem by T.P. Noel

A haiku about love and loss.

I can't forget them

Memories so bittersweet

Of when you loved me.

© 2017 T.P. Noel

Author's Note

I don't have much experience with Poetry. Constructive criticism is always appreciated.

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marilyn 1225

short and to the point and who can forget the love that once was,,,

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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7 Years Ago

Thanks for the Review!

7 Years Ago

i find your first chapter or beginning of the story '' She didn't Believe in Magic to be captivatin.. read more

7 Years Ago

i sometimes believe in magic too!

Gabriel

I like it. It's short but nice ;) Definetely keep writing!

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thanks, I will!

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Added on October 27, 2017
Last Updated on October 27, 2017

Author

T.P. Noel

Welland, Ontatrio, Canada

About

I am an aspiring writer based in Ontario. I probably won't put my chapters from my WIP novels here because my goal is to get them published and a publisher may not like that I shared them publicly. .. more..

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