"Family"

Intro:

 

Hey yo.... There's always a point.... when the fame gets to ya... But there's always one thing.... That's most important... and that's family...

 

Chorus:

 

// Remember your life/ Remember where you're from/ Remember where you call home when the day is done/ Remember the lives that lead you down the path/ They are your family an' that's where home is at// X2

 

Verse 1:

 

There's a place I call home/ it's with my wife an' kid/ Reguardless of outside/ it's where I can live/ It's the feeling of want/ The feeling of love/ It's where all my troubles/ are sent up above/ It's where I can play/ an' watch my babygirl sleep/ It's where I can make my wife/ something romantic to eat/ It's knowin' I'm safe/ That the world is aright/ Where all my worries get up/ an' take flight/ It's hearin' my daughter/ an' wantin' ta cry/ cause the joy of holdin' her/ just brings tears to my eyes/ It's livin' in peace/ without a care in the world/ Holdin' my daughter/ an' kissin' my girl/ It's holdin' her hand/ an' tellin' her she's safe/ It's where the weight of the world/ shifts to a distant place/ It's where I am happy/ It's where I am free/ It's where I can finally/ act like I'm me/ It's takin' a bath/ or even a shower/ A place to go home/ when it's the final hour/ It's like nothin' before/ that you've ever even seen/ It's almost majestic/ like walkin' into a dream/ I can't explain it/ It's just one of thoes things/ It's like walking into a kingdom/ and I am the king/ You can't just hold it/ It's something in your heart/ that tells you it's ok/ when your world falls apart/ It speaks from within/ right from the soul/ It's a feeling of joy/ that just consumes you whole/ It's continuous laughter/ it's joyous tears/ It keeps you moving on/ in these years/ It makes you laugh/ it makes you cry/ It shows you the reasons/ why you must try/ It's your family an they always remain true/ They help me the most/ through the pain I go through/

 

Chorus:

 

// Remember your life/ Remember where you're from/ Remember where you call home when the day is done/ Remember the lives that lead you down the path/ They are your family an' that's where home is at// X4

 

Verse 2:

 

It's the feeling I get/ when I look into her eyes/ I know I can trust her/ not to tell me lies/ It's goin' home to mama/ an' spendin' time with her/ When the day comes to an end/ there ain't nothin I fear/ I know this is home/ it's where I belong/ It inspires me everyday/ to write a new song/ This feeling inside/ it's too great to keep in/ It gives me hope/ an' the will ta keep livin'/ A family is called home/ It's the beginning of yo roots/ It's deep in yo blood/ there's no denyin' the truth/ When all hope seems lost/ they the ones you turn to for help/ In yo heart they all you can trust/ when you can't trust no one else/ I thank God for my brother/ an' all the support that he brings/ Thank God for my friends/ and the Kottonmouth Kings/ They are my motivation/ My will to carry on/ I listen to their words/ an' it motivates me to stay strong/ Follow your dreams/ an' don't chu ever give up/ Stand up against/ an' fight back when you've had enough/ Don't let people boss ya around/ an' say you can't do it/ Instead go out there/ an' show them all yeah prove it/ Don't let them walk ov'a ya/ an' bring you down/ Rise up an' be heard/ Brothers and sisters lets all make a sound/ Get on yo feet/ Lets all make some noise/ Act like yo children/ when they play with they toys/ It's when I go to Heaven/ I'm starin' at Golden Gates/ I softly speak to the Lord/ I say God there must be some mistake/ You see I don't belong here/ cause I've done more harm than good/ He says there is no mistake/ for you are home now as you should/ I know of the deeds you've done/ an' my son you are forgiven/ Now follow me if you please/ an' I'll guide you to Heaven/ I drop to my knees/ cause I know now that I'm home/ Never again will I hurt/ cause now I know I'm not alone/

 

Chorus:

 

// Remember your life/ Remember where you're from/ Remember where you call home when the day is done/ Remember the lives that lead you down the path/ They are your family an' that's where home is at// X4 

Author's Note

Obviously I ask that you ingnore the grammar as it is a rap song and grammar is not needed. All I ask is for honesty and if need be brutality when you review this song.

Reviews

[AYVID N]

Hey! Your lyrics got me sitting upright here! The first verse really really got to me. It's so poignant and so true. I felt good and bad at the same time. Good...coz if every family man can feel this way...the world would have so much fewer broken homes. Bad...coz I was in a relationship with someone having a family and after reading your verse I understand I was dumped for the right reasons! So thats's how effective your verse is! Please carry on writing! You have somethng great to offer the world! I'm sure it will sound great too. :)

[TNB]

I cannot thank you enough for your review. Thats the exact emotion i was hoping for and I've been in the studio recording it. Hopefully I can have it up soon.

[SnuggleBunnyQueen]

I would love to hear the music behind the rap honestly. I know that doesn't mean much from a person that writes poems and stories, but that's just my opinion. I think that you should surely record this one!

[TNB]

I have one lol I just gotta get to a stuido to record it.

[Jordan's Back]

This is a nice rap with a great flow and a wonderful message. Awesome job!

[TNB]

Glad you like it bud. I just need to get back in the studio and record my lyrics soon lol

[Jordan's Back]

Well get to it :P I aint gonna stop ya lol :P