God's Intent with Life

God gave life to two humans,
two humans gave life to humanity.
Humanity gave birth to curiosity,
curiosity invented technology.
Technology started war,
war gave way to peace.
peace is the reason for friendship,
friendship is guilty for terrorism.
Is this really what god meant by giving life,
no is his answer to us all.

-TMS.Shammie

(Tejas Shah)

Reviews

[M. E. Lee]

It started out as something very clever, but I feel that it ended a bit abruptly. Very good piece, however.

[Alz Alz]

Wow, this is really intense... Good write.