Find Your Dreams

 

Find your dreams tonight

Feel your body become so light

That you soar high, and go far-

And hug the moon, and kiss a star…

 

Find your dreams alive

When finally at the starry gates you arrive

Look down at the earth, stretch your fingertips

Reach out to your friends, and blow me a kiss…

 

Find your dreams come true

May the night-visions be kind to you

And maybe-just maybe-I wish, for your sake

You’ll find your dreams when you awake…

 

Find your dreams tonight.

 

Reviews

[Dinesh Sairam]

I'd just recommend a correction of the long lines to match with their respective rhyming lines.. If not the rhythm, at least the number of syllables. But the simple wording and romantic imagery really pays off. Good work here. Keep writing.

[A. M. Hood]

This poem is very dreamy and romantic and I get a sense of calmness while I read it. It makes me want to relax and just dream away.

[Carrie Manor]

How very romantic, and dreamy! Indeed, what you have described in my opinion is the most calming, and mystic of dreams. It makes me wish I was flying in outer space... (:

[Ashley]

Very good rhyming. Such a beautiful poem. Use this on your crush, you might win their heart ;)

[DropDeadDenise]

=) i like the rhyming in this poem, it just added to the affect =) great job

[Champagne]

Lovely tone, rhyme and rhythm. This poem has a very sweet and hopeful tone. Uplifting, a pleasure to read.

[thoughts of jade]

i love it...

[Jacey Lane-DeVille]

A charming piece that is light and airy and the repetitive "find your dream" parts really does hit home that we should find our dream and follow it. Even if it will lead us to heart break. We'll never know unless we try

[Papercuts.Hate.You.Too]

Very inspiring
Makes me want to find my dream just because
But then again isn't that why we do everything?
Just because
With lots of ninja love
-AnnabellAccident