Here are things that never happened, except for one, which almost sorta kinda did happen. The way they are arranged is such to facilitate some kind of rhythm; or so I think.
This is indeed a very intense cataloging of the hurdles between human beings attempting to relate to each other on the deepest levels, even between those who are close to each other...the "human condition" is represented in these poems in full force...keep up the good work :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
I think all I know is the human condition, yet I am only one example of it.
I fear if I was to.. read moreI think all I know is the human condition, yet I am only one example of it.
I fear if I was to contain any more of this concept I would take root and flower and spew the world with the sweet succour of my spores.
12 Years Ago
I don't consider it a bad deed to spew the world in such a fashion, but of course you have to write .. read moreI don't consider it a bad deed to spew the world in such a fashion, but of course you have to write what you feel, and you've covered a lot of bases more than respectably to date.
This is indeed a very intense cataloging of the hurdles between human beings attempting to relate to each other on the deepest levels, even between those who are close to each other...the "human condition" is represented in these poems in full force...keep up the good work :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
I think all I know is the human condition, yet I am only one example of it.
I fear if I was to.. read moreI think all I know is the human condition, yet I am only one example of it.
I fear if I was to contain any more of this concept I would take root and flower and spew the world with the sweet succour of my spores.
12 Years Ago
I don't consider it a bad deed to spew the world in such a fashion, but of course you have to write .. read moreI don't consider it a bad deed to spew the world in such a fashion, but of course you have to write what you feel, and you've covered a lot of bases more than respectably to date.
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