You've Got A Friend

You've Got A Friend

A Poem by tk
"

Standing up for a friend is a way of giving them support when they are being criticized, teased or taken advantage of.

"

Whenever obstacles and hardships arise

And like a flickering fire, your hope slowly dies

Never give up, I will be here by your side

Ready to comfort you with arms opened wide.

 

When the world is turning its back against you

And you feel helpless, not knowing what to do

Don’t be sad, don’t let them bring you down

I’ll put a smile on your face every time you’ll frown.

 

If you feel inside your heart unbearable pain

Because every effort you make is in vain

Don’t hesitate to call me amidst your suffering

Because I’ll be there to ease the pain you’re bearing.

 

Whenever giving up becomes your only option

Because in your problems you can’t find the right solution

I will always stand beside you until the end

Through sunshine and rain, you’ve got a friend.

© 2012 tk


Author's Note

tk
poem about friendship.. :)
please do leave some reviews.. thank you. :)

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

[send message][befriend] Subscribe
Me
Brave soul who writes a poem using the title of a classic Carol King song! The word "'COZ' means nothing, it should be "because"

Posted 12 Years Ago


Portrayed a very nice version of friendship. There were some lines that were weak, and there were some lines that were leaking with brilliance and strength. I especially loved that last line, "Through sunshine and rain, you've got a friend". That line stood out from the others.
You could use a little more work, just keep trying harder to achieve better writes. You will get better with more work you post out, no doubt. Keep striving for more improved work! I hope you don't take that the wrong way.
Great write, keep it up!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aw, this is such a nice poem! the sort of thing i honestly WISH i could write but somehow all I could do is write these heavy, darker things and the occasional stuff about God and Philosophy. I really love this poem. Inspiring and peaceful. Beauty shines from your pen. Thank you for sharing this with me!

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was a great poem :) It definitely portrayed the definition of friendship :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aw...A really great poem about friendship...You make me want to tell myself that there are still some "true friends" in this world...This has a nice flow from every line to another...Keep it up...
:)))

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice writing!
haha.. :) And good timing! Because I'm a little bit depressed right now and thanks for your poem, it cheered me up!

Great job! Keep it up!


(edi ikaw na!.. hahaha ^^)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


2
next Next Page
last Last Page
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

885 Views
16 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 4 Libraries
Added on January 10, 2012
Last Updated on January 12, 2012
Tags: friendship, friends

Author

tk
tk

Philippines



Writing
The Moment I Knew The Moment I Knew

A Poem by tk


Unspoken Love Unspoken Love

A Poem by tk



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Tainted Heart Tainted Heart

A Poem by Thea


promise promise

A Poem by Amata Luna