Remember To Forget

Remember To Forget

A Poem by tk
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You taught me how to love; you taught me how to live; you taught me how to laugh; you taught me how to cry, but when you left, you forgot to teach me how to forget you.

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It’s  two a.m., says the clock

But I’m still awake, reminiscing the past

Was meeting you just a sort of luck?

Suddenly out of my grasp, not meant to last?

 

I heard you’re doing fine without me

You’re with her now, you seem so contented

Is taking me for granted just too easy?

Now you’re not around, you left me deserted.

 

Whenever I see you, it’s just awkward

I can’t talk to you like I used to before

I’m the greatest pretender, I deserve an award

I’m smiling but deep inside it cuts me to the core.

 

I existed in your life, don’t you recall?

I’m probably in those unwritten chapters

You remembered to forget me, after all

Left me in the dark with my heart shattered.

© 2013 tk


Author's Note

tk
I wrote my heart out on this piece. I just feel totally empty... Anyway, thanks for reading.
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*5th Dec 6, 2012
Expressive Poetry

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I love the picture ("Hi, I exist") and I love the poem. This is really sad and heartbreaking. It really hurts when the other person moves on easily and you're left remembering the past and hoping he'll come back. You showed it well through this poem. I think it flowed well, and the rhyme scheme was really good. Good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I love this poetry, its like a bittersweet memory of Love, i live that its very relatable short flowed really well... all in all it was really good :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


heart break is what smakes great poems.beautiful sadness

Posted 10 Years Ago


Such a great expression of loss. The pain you felt is evident and clear. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Aww! :'( This is amazing and I know exactly how you feel! My boyfriend I just woke up and he's already in love with another girl! It really sucks! But reading this poem was amazing and it made me feel a lot better!! :) Thanks for putting this up!

Posted 12 Years Ago


A nice write, thanks for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I quite liked 'whenever' to 'before' I thought that was powerful and poignant. The use of oxymoron 'remembered to forget me' I thought that was great in giving the idea that he purposely went out of his way to forget, and so emotional distance, with a tinge of anger is expressed well in this poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice piece

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Pax
wonders of a broken heart. nice write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


wow this one was deep ive felt this pain many times great write:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is sooo sad! I like the way it flows though. Nice piece and thanks for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on December 28, 2011
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