A Night to Remember

There they stand, the innumerable stars, shining in order like a living hymn, written in light. ~N.P. Willis

Your stares boring right through me alluringly

Intensity in your eyes, burning me slowly

I'm lost for words, it's plain to see

I'm overpowered by your presence, it's killing me.

 

Dancing to the erotic rhythm 

Our hearts beating fast, our bodies in flame

Every subtle touch of your fingers on my skin

Bring me euphoria, leaving me softly moaning.

 

My body wrapped in your strong arms

Once again, I'm captivated by your charms

As we move under the dim light

Ineluctably caressing each other, we're a lascivious sight.

 

We are closing to the ecstasy

Our bodies writhing, we're in a wild frenzy

And as the melody dies,

Still arrested in our world, desire seen in our eyes.

 

The erotic dance you taught me

Stirred all my senses, drowning me insanely

It is a feverish night to remember

Never to forget, our moments of pure pleasure.

 

 

Author's Note

Thanks for reading. :)
I was making a poem about prom but it turned out to be like this. Anyway, please leave a review. Thank youuuuu. :)))

Reviews

[Queen Empress]

Beautifully expressed feeling :)

[Sunni Davis]

This is fantastic! Its very sensual and romantic!

[khalid]

i love it. i loved how you have designed it, the images you have picked and the words picking..

[Me]

nicely crafted...beautiful flow of feelings...

[sarah]

awwwwwwwwww this is really really great :-) it's sweet and sexy at the same time I really enjoyed this great write!

[Alex Miller<3]

Wow, This is truly great.
Great job! -Alex Miller

[Tai Ryens]

Great write! I liked the use of words in this poem, especially in the first stanza. Great poem once again!