Chapter 1

Faith clutched her bag as she walked inside the alley. She knew he is waiting for her with the rest of his pals. Danish Roy, a chief Loafer who was always accompanied by his followers.

Ever since he came living in the neighbourhood, he showed an unhealthy interest in her. Faith did her best to avoid him, but it was quite impossible, as he rented the house which face the orphanage.

The place where Faith lived.

She saw him from a distance smoking a joint as he played cards with his friends. As if he knew she was observing him, he lifted his head and caught her gaze.

"Here comes my beloved!" He announced with a loud voice.

Everyone around him laughed and whistled.

Faith felt her cheeks heat up and she quicken her steps.

She tries to enter the orphanage's entrance but Danish came right in front of her. "Hey what's the rush? Why don't you join us?"

"No, thanks," she muttered. "I have to cook dinner."

"Wait up! My love! I am serious, you know nothing is fun without you."

He caught her hand and Faith opened her eyes wide. "Danish! Leave me!"

"Danish?" He threw his head backwards and let out a cruel laugh. "You don't know how I love hearing my name on your lips."

"I mean it! Leave my hand!"

He did not listen and bought her flush close to his chest. He smirked and bend down to kiss her.

"Danish!" A male's voice shouted loudly.

They both turned towards his direction.

Danish kept Faith close to him and muttered.Here come the

spoilsport."

Ray stared at them with rage and immediately took Faith away from Danish's hold.

"What do you think, you are doing? Troubling her in public like this?"

Danish was not replying but he kept staring at Ray's hand as if he wanted to rip those fingers away from her skin.

Faith did not want any fight and she gently free herself from Ray. She saw Danish getting calm and he gave her a quick wink.

Ray was still ranting! Look at me when I am speaking to you! Hey are you even listening to me?"

Danish folded his arms. "No! I was too busy admiring Faith's charming green eyes!"

"You!"

"Ray! Enough!"

"But Faith! He!"

"I know how he is! There's no need to step down on his level! The children must be hungry. Let's go!"

"No, he always gets away because you keep defending him. Today I am going to teach this low-life a lesson."

Danish became livid. "What did you say? A low-life!"

She came between the two men. "I want you to end this right now!"

"Faith!?!"

"Please, Ray for Maya's sake."

Ray turns towards Danish and said with an angry voice. "Thanks your lucky stars! I decided to spare your life today."

Danish took a step backwards and lifted his hands up in mock terror. "Oh I am so scared! I made the great Raymond, furious!"

Both Faith and Ray ignored his words and turned their backs away from him.

"Hey Faith!"

She twirled behind to face him. "What is it now?"

"Remember this! You might be leaving with him today but there will be one day when you will want to stay only with me.

She shivered, the determination in his eyes indicated a bad omen. "How can you be so sure?"

" You know it! Deep down, you know you belong to me." He placed his hand on his heart and stared directly at her. "You are mine!"

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Reviews

[Jack O]

Do you want an honest review? or just to know that someone read your work?

[T.K.F]

Hi, both would be nice :)

[Jack O]

are you writing this as an anime? movie that you see in your head? curious. it reads that way.

[Jack O]

Danish adjusted his binoculars to view her face. He knew she would always wake up at this hour to water the potted plants.

He kept observing her lips as she was humming her favorite song. They were delicate and filled with a pink color. Damn! I want to kiss her so badly.

Danish watched the girl through is binoculars. He saw her lips moving and the pretty pink of them and he said aloud, "Gods I want to kiss her so bad."
He watched as watered the plants on the clock work time schedule she kept. Danish shook his head and wondered if he would ever be as mature.

His door slammed open and he heard his name yelled.

I am not trying to one up you. I am trying to show you how to show a picture. If you do art, can draw, your is perfect. you can draw the detail, show movement. show intellect. Show emotion.
I cannot draw.
Do you understand? I am very sorry if I have upset you.

[Jack O]

In writing we have to explain right and left handed. Cause it matters. Claire reached our her left hand and held Thomas about the neck.
He looked at her and his eyes went wide as she closed her hand.
She had one the troll hand from the death queen and his life was the cost of her keeping it.

[Jack O]

one should be, won. meh. I suck. But I hope you get my point. Artists have it easy. they just draw it. We have to write it.
I really hope this helps.

[T.K.F]

Wow, thank so much to give me guidance
That's was so nice of you to give me advices.
Actually I plan to rewrite those parts later.
This is more like a first attempt :)
It's nice to know how I can improve my writing.
Don't worry you did not upset me.
I do watch anime and read manga.
Maybe I got inspired by them.
Thank you once again :)

[Jack O]

I love anime. Watched all of black rock shooter in a day and then first season of attack on titan. gods, what an incident.

[T.K.F]

I watched AOT too :) Death Note and several others.
FMA is one of my favorite.