First taste

I have been looking for you. So vast and strong. I saw you in my dreams. So hard and strong. Not knowing you were right in front of me. Is it a sign that we must be? Indeed it has to be. You and I are one but not the same. Give me to you? Could I possibly be insane? To embark on a journey so fast and prolonged.... how can I ensure that this is my heart's most accurate song...? For you, entice my curiosity. I desire you so much; I want you wholeheartedly; I want to prove my deity wrong. But this craving I have for you is quite contrary, for you are not what I expected. Refreshing you are. And that is no lie. My heart sings your praises, and my mind lives the moment.

For in that time was the most I have felt in so long. Please do not be alarmed. Do not be surprised. I have longed and wanted you just the same. Frightened? I hope not. I can be aggressive and compelling simultaneously; you breathe life where it has dissipated. You are an oasis where an illusion existed. I pray for your understanding and your time. I am an awkward and peculiar being. I am difficult and yet so gentle but loving at the same time. I desire your touch and your approval. When we first kissed, you set my soul on fire. Your contact has satisfied my craving. Your words inspired me. I could not have wanted you more than ever at that very time. But I want you still. Kiss me, my love. Please hold me and warp your essence all around me. Feel me, indulge me. Give me a chance for me to prove to you that I can be more than just lust to you. Your dark raven hair, deep brown eyes, and soft, beautiful lips. Pierced my soul and awakened my long-lost joy. I must say your bite completely smites me. And I won't walk down your path of experience with thee.

Reviews

[Sage]

Wow, this piece messed my emotions for a while. I absolutely loved what you wrote.

[samparks,sam]

I like it completely, Every sentence is full of sense, nice thought. I read and realize all the theme of your poem

[Aswin R Prasad]

All your poems are very deep and intense..
Loved this one too :) Thanks for sharing! :)

[TheMalady]

I love the lines: "So vast and strong." and "So hard and strong." These lines left a deep impact upon me. Loved it! :)

[Leran Vakem]

A truly great love poem. I could feel the but also the struggle of should you give everything or nothing to this feeling. Well done a great read

L.V.