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Deception of a devoured soul.

Swallowed by the pits of sorrow.

Kissed goodbye are the signs of a fairy tale ending.

Sinking fast in the tar pits with no vine of redemption in sight to pull me out of your choke hold.

Hallucinations of a beautiful love affair that only involves you and me.

Hoping that Destiny hears my plea.

To create our paths so that they lead you to me.

Even though you don't know how deep my love for you goes.

Cursed are the angles that let you fly free.

Burning is the passion that fuels my soul with thoughts of lustful activities we could perform.

Contorted illusions and undiscovered limits we have not ventured.

Kiss me with your soul and caress me with your touch.

Love me as I love you and seduce my sexual desire with your luscious apatite.

Give all your heart has to offer, and I will give you my everlasting devotion and eternal submission.

For I love you and all that you have to offer.

 

Reviews

[Leran Vakem]

Love and lust, two very powerful emotions. In my opinion you can not love someone without a certain degree of lust for that person. If that lust falls away the relationship will become routine and not love anymore. But this piece is so well written that I can feel the love and lust the speaker has for the other person. I really enjoy reading this poem.
Thank you

L.V.

[Aswin R Prasad]

Good poem... I've always loved poems that gave a reason to hope..
Nicely written..Enjoyed reading it! :) (Only got time to read it now)

[Sage]

Wow, this is such a nice verse! I like the flow of the scenes and the language used! It is beautiful. :)