self suffering

I have broken the bond of the ribbon of Conception. I have failed the Sands of Time. I have angered the balance of the Universe and upset the being known as God. I have bitten the forbidden fruit from the Tree of Seduction and disgraced my hearts' content. I have been selfish and disobedient to those who know me most. I have acted on impulse and pure adrenaline alone. I have sinned against my conscience and ignored the warning signs. I have walked through hell, and I have walked through the tundras of the North. I walked until my feet bled from the pain that I had caused my body to endure. Finally, I have agreed to sell my soul to the one I wish it for. However, it's clear that the offer still stands due to a notice of a burning command. I have dishonored and shamed my heart, and now it's time to prove I have done all this, to steal a moment in time with you..........

Reviews

[Aswin R Prasad]

Brilliant poem..A very intense write.. Everyone tries to give their all to the people they want in their life..And for this,they would sacrifice anything..

I really can relate to each and every word you've written..

I loved how each and every line kept me curious for the next line and how the poem ended positively :)

[Tiffany K Charles]

Thank you very much.... I write from my Mind Palace.... Where I store old emotions and try to use them in every line..... The way Edgar Allan Poe or Walt Whitman had..... I think I'll eventually venture into novels..... I'm checking out your work as we message .....

[Aswin R Prasad]

You are very welcome :)

[V]

I like the self-consuming aspect about this one. It's relatable and beautifully written.

[TheMalady]

A vivid image of a person walking through the storm of sacrifices for the sake of loving someone. You have portrayed it very well. I can see the artist-writer in you through your works. Great piece! :)

[samparks,sam]

I will share you every time
If you want so, that nice for life

[Sage]

Wow, this is intense. The passion is quite evident in this piece! I can relate to your mind palace writing method, I do the same too! But I must admit, this is quite a good piece.