THE SOFT SPOT

...about fear

Take your hands away

 

I cannot need

 

you or anyone

 

can’t ever know

 

how hard it is for me

 

to stop from coming undone

 

how hard I try

 

to stay composed

 

could break you

 

Do not love me

 

I cannot return

 

feelings so deep

 

a simple crack

 

can cause a bleed

 

I cannot take

 

your hands

 

being warm

 

I may get use

 

to having you

 

may leave someday

 

feelings may subside

 

so take your hands away

 

I cannot need

 

you or anyone

 

can never know

 

how much and how deep

 

I love when I love who I love

　

　

　

Reviews

[TK]

Thank you, I appreciate your interpretation and am very glad that it gave you such feelings of understanding...btw you are right on the money, everything you mentioned is what I felt when I wrote this.

[JelliFyshKissUs]

OOOOOO wee! That is deep as deep can get. You are blowing my mind, Tk. And I love for my mind to shatter into tiny fragments of pleasure. This is not just fear, my love. This is a grave fear of loving... maybe it is due to scorn, maybe due to your own lack of ability to reciprocate... whatever the reason, it is sooo relatable. But again, it is that way you have with words that sends me into exultation. I feel them inside of me as little hardbeats that get my blood flowing. You are phenomenal. I hope you never stop writing.