Fat Cat

Nonsense!

The cat ate the rat.

He grew so fat.

He tried to nap-

on his mommy's lap;

But she cried  "Forget that!"

Reviews

[SilentDreamer]

I smiled when I read this. Most of the writing on this site is sad. Which is fine, cause that's the genre I usually write- dark poetry. But this was so different. A nice change. It flows well and I really like it. Great job. Keep writing. :D

[Shelby Baker]

Haha! Wow! I think despite it being 5 am i will remember this and repeat it tomorrow to my family or friends. Catchy, short, simple, awesome. lol

[Undying Glory]

short but extremely catchy. really cute too i think. considering how rarely i use the word "cute" that's certainly saying something

[Aimee Mahathy]

XD This is so cute! Such a brief moment in life; that happens quite often. Seeing as how I'm a cat lover, this was a lot of fun to read~