Let There Be Peace On Earth

MY WISH FOR ETERNAL PEACE ON THIS EARTH!

Let There Be Peace On Earth

By T. Pina

Father God, let there be peace on your earth,
Please let it begin in my heart.
Let this world peace be everlasting,
A peace that would never part.
Your earth is totally exhausted from millenniums
of senseless wars, devastation and disharmony.
Lord, please let there be peace on this earth,

For all of mankind to see!

God, let there be peace on thy earth, 
 May it all begin, right now.
Guide every step I take,
As a peace maker and writer, 

 This quest, I now do vow.
My soul is weary of the plaques

Mankind has brought

Upon this magnificent earth,

With their destructive conflicts,

Greed and horrid deviancy. 
Please allow me to live to see this dream come true,

But father, just one more thing I ask,

Please let this world peace be eternally.

Author's Note

This is from the heart of one writer, that is just tired of unnessary wars that have brought so much pain and suffering upon mankind!
Together as writers let's all make a difference on this earth!
WE CAN MAKE A DIFFERENCE!

Reviews

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

GREAT JOB! kind of similar to your poem that one first place in my contest "just because" mainly because of the same idea. There is evil on this planet, we can see it everday in ads, tv, society, neighborhoods, all around us. And Christmas is celebrating Christ, and I think many forget that when they get caught up so much in Santa and gifts etc. you help remind us...LET'S BRING PEACE ON THIS EARTH THIS CHRISTMAS!!! NICE JOB TJ.

KENA

[Tony]

I can feel your true soul in this piece Tim, from the very first sentence...the pleading with God to give us peace. You caught me in a moment of deep reflection.

Tony

[just is]

Amen to this, this is so wonderful, like this.

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

i love this poem, it crys for world peace,and we can all use that! very nice poem! x0x0x0x

[Pj]

:D Well I just feel like saying "YAY!!!" You seriously just managed to write in one poem- the best prayer. By asking for peace you have touched on every issue there is...because inequality and hardships can be resolved by peace!
Fantastic write!

[Wondering Mind]

A beautiful prayer which I think many of us human beings share, and you're so correct in that it has to start from within our own beings, the self, the heart, the mind. Great piece.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

AMEN to that... and you are so correct... it need to start in our own hearts as we need to pass it on to friends and strangers anyways we can... not all will reciprocate but if we don't try we will never know.

[JudyC]

This is beautiful. I appreciate the emphasis on the need for peace within oneself, with God's guidance. The last three lines are especially moving and inspiring. Thanks for sharing this prayer.

[Angel's Lady]

A beautiful prayer of hope...Great write, Tim.

[Donna DeLong Matthews a..]

Oh my new friend the pen is much mightier than sword...
Oh I hate war but senseless Im not so sure about that.
Wonderful write.
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