Maa

Its a hindi poem describing the thoughts of a new born girl child wheb she first sees her mother and she is lying in her lap.

Jab main thi aankhe kholi
Koi pari si mujhse boli
Swagat hai sansar mei
Meri bitiyaa , pyaar se

Pari voh bilkul vaisi jaisi
Mujhe khuda ne bataya tha
Phoolo ki pankhudiyo me simatakar
Uski godh mei litaya tha

Soch rahi thi rishte mei
Mai usko kya bolungi
Apne dil ke raz, usse kaise kholungi

Jaane kaise usne jaanli
Maire manki har ik baar
Boli mujhse maa hu teri
Jaan lungi har ik baat

Yeh sunkar man hua khush
Aai dil ko rahat thi
Meri kilkari se hui khush
Jaise yahi MAA ki chahat thi.

Author's Note

Dear readers... i hope you will like this poem... i have written this specially for my mother. Its just my imagination..... hope you all will like it because we all love our mother....:-)

Reviews

[CA Anurag Sharma]

fabulous write this one... especially first two paras.... bhut hi zyada ache...

[Anannya Saraswat]

Thanks anurag

[Frank]

Jab main thi aankhe kholi [if this is English then I am a Dutchman's uncle]

Perhaps you mean you have written the poem phonetically using Roman alphabet and type, I get your meaning now, thank you.

[Frank]

Well, I tired a few Hindi translating services and none could identify this language, its doesn't eem to be a main version of Hindi.

[Anannya Saraswat]

Actually Frank, i have written this poem in roman english..... the language is hindi but the words are in english... but i make u sure that next time i will post my hindi poems in hindi and also post some of my english poems

[Abilash Uttama]

very nice poem, if you are writing something about mother it's ought to be good Maa ke pyaar ki baat hi niraali hai...:)

[Anannya Saraswat]

Thakyou Abhilash for appreciating my poem....nd you r right maa ki baat sach mei nirali hoti hai