To be determined

A work in progress.

Ah mortality,

my old friend.

 

I see you lurking in the shadows...

circling me like a vulture

before descending on the dead.

 

But I know you for what you really are,

an illusion...

the shell that encases the soul,

made of flesh and blood.

Author's Note

This is a work in progress and I feel it is unfinished in spite of a friend telling me it is complete and can stand alone.

Reviews

[Chris]

Many pieces of larger works can stand alone... but its our intent we address and if it doesn't meet our purpose then it is not done nor ready. I understand the "taste" of this one as it relates to me... I look forward to listening how - after you have finished - it tastes to you.

Chris

[Dylan S.]

Ah, a fascinating read. Very good for a work in progress.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I believe this is complete... yet, it does leave open for continuation. Nice write! Well written. :)