Wondering

Haiku, getting. Better. I hope ;-;

Wondering, why me?
Then it comes to me, why not?
Who else could it be?

Reviews

[Writer *78*]

The ever burning question on everyone's mind when it comes down to actually doing something 'Why not?' The question 'Why me?' can come down to alot of things when people ask it. Overall a very good write for three lines. Feel free to check out my writing as well.

-Writer *78*

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Great write(: good questions. Although haikus are only three lines, I think this one has its own little story.. You did a good job of showing that &expressing emotion(: great job with this, it's beautiful (: Also, I've wondered about these questions a lot too.. Very relatable, which I can imagine must be hard to do with a haiku.

[Aurora Dawn]

Haikus are hard for me, I always mess up the syllables. Putting emotion into haikus Is extremely hard for me, I'm glad that I'm getting better.

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

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