Angel with broken wings

Why does the worst happen to the best?

You're an angel with broken wings,

You've experianced one million things.

You've been beated and hurt,

Scars hiding under the sleves of your Shirt.

But all the kind you do,

I find it hard to be true.

Somebody so good being hurt so bad,

Just the thought of it makes me mad.

The worst happens to the best,

What about the rest?

The ones who do wrong,

But you are so strong.

You don't deserve the pain,

You're stuck in the chain.

The chain holds you back,

But you will never crack.

You're an angel with broken wings,

You've experianced one million things.

Reviews

[Norah]

Often these words are not heard as they are held close to the heart. well done!

[Reneé H]

This is gorgeous! Wow...just truly stunning. You captured the emotion beautifully.

[Hannah Jocks]

This was an amazing poem. I actually almost cried. It really has deep meaning and is beautiful. You are a very good writer.

[A love for poetry]

Perfect! Just a couple of typos to be fixed up.

[Howard Blacklove]

I think this was pretty sweet and inspiring especially if aimed towards a person who is going through some kind of hardship. Its short , to the point and easy to interpret. Looks good.

[Crimson Bayonet]

Simply amazing and emotional. I absolutely loved it! :)

[Phillitup]

experiance=experience...besides that it's truly wonderful. It is emotional but because it is well-written you can pull off that emotion. Well done!

[Jack Reaper]

simply wonderful. i must say in my own experience, it seems all the pain makes us stronger and better people for living through the worst. atleast some of the greatest people i know have lived through terrible things. great write

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

There are a couple misspellings but I'm sure that's due to no fault of your own(: great write, I really liked the feeling of it, and the rhythm of it. You did an amazing job with this, thanks for sharing(:

[masquerade13]

I think this is one of my favorite poems ever

[Aurora Dawn]

I'm so glad you like it that much!