Fighting

Lost in thought,
I've fought and fought.
The words I said,
They got to your head.
I was never trying to hurt you,
When you hurt, I hurt too.
I love you, I do,
I gave up so much for you.
This fighting is killing me,
I need you to listen to my plea.
I forgive you,
Do you forgive me?

Reviews

[Hannah Jocks]

I honestly have nothing bad to say about your writing. I feel like your writing really speaks to readers and even thought they cant completely relate to it they feel the emotion you give off through your poems. I always says "There's always room for improvement" But as of right now this is a very well written poem. I love it.

[Reneé H]

REally well executed, it has a good point and is very relatable!

[Howard Blacklove]

This poem reminds me of a well written note or letter. I feel like the art of letter writing is sort of a lost craft. This is beautiful expressed. Its straight forward and honest. Thank you for keeping the art of poetic letter writing alive buddy. Awesome

[Shubham's View]

Is that a rhetoric question? Because after reading the poem one's heart has got to melt! ^_^
Though I 'd say, throw in a few more lines and go with the flow and a rhythm if you feel one while writing!

[Phillitup]

This is sweet and well-written. It's true to the point poetry!

[Crimson Bayonet]

Wow, short and simple, yet strong and powerful! Awesome job, keep it up! :)