That One Girl

I am really unsure about this poem. :/

She is the girl, always letting out a laugh

But you don't even know the half.

Deep inside she feels alone

Hoping her cover will never be blown.

Her only real friends live miles away

Thinking about them day after day

She hates being so alone.

She hides the scars on her hips

Her secrets never leave her lips.

She cries at night

looking for that light

That will guide her back home.

Reviews

[Phillitup]

I,to, can relate. For years wondering when I can once again find myself.

[Haley Lynn Thomas]

I know this feeling. I think a lot of people do. You describe it so well. I wish I could rhyme half as well as you do.

[Aurora Dawn]

Rhyming can be a hard concept. But it gets easier the more you expand your vocabulary. I read half a dictionary once, just to drill new words into my head. It worked well:3

[rnuff]

very wonderful written, like the rhyme scheme

[Brandon Oliver Losier]

very beautifully written, love.

[tamsin]

This is really well written, and very sad. Excellent stuff dude : D

[Aurora Dawn]

Thank you :3

[tamsin]

That's cool : D It was a nice read, I hope you will have a look at some of my stuff : D

[Aurora Dawn]

I'll be sure to check some of it out:3

[tamsin]

Cheers dude : D