Love and Hate

You see, my dear.
There's a fine line between love, and hate.
One day you love me, the next you can't wait to kick me out
And flood me with hate.
There's only so much, that one girl can take.
When did our love take that wrong turn down the road,
Of no forgiveness, no love, no concern.
We want the same things, so let's stand as one.
Stop looking back, it will all soon be gone.
It's almost too late, so please just love me, and it can be great.

Reviews

[Reneé H]

In the last line, make sure you correct the spelling of "too." Other than that, I think you picked a topic that many people can relate to and portray it well. Nice work!

[Aurora Dawn]

Thankyou!
I didn't notice my mistake.
I'm glad you like it:)

[Reneé H]

Definitely! :)