I love you

What can I do, to make you stay
And look at me in that way.
I want you, I need you, I must say.
I never thought I would feel this way.
Something about you, draws me near,
All I want is to hear you say, "I love you, Dear"
But you don't, because of fear.
Will you stay, and not walk away?

Reviews

[Sid]

This is short but portrays the emotions wonderfully...great write!!

[Soul Fire]

I love this, so short..so sweet..so beautiful

[Aurora Dawn]

Thankyou:3

[Soul Fire]

You're welcome

[quinfinn]

i love those short, sweet declarations of undying love...so pertinent, so beautiful. congratulations on a victory. nice write!

[Aurora Dawn]

Thankyou so much
I try to put a lot of thought and feeling into my writings.
I am so glad you like it!

[quinfinn]

;)

[Tasha]

This says a lot with so few words. Great job.

[Aurora Dawn]

Thankyou Tasha:)

[Tasha]

You're welcome :)

[NathanBlackie]

I like it. It's short and says what it means.

[Aurora Dawn]

Thankyou so much for the review!:)

[NathanBlackie]

Ha it's the least i could do. thanks for the poem.