Don't Walk Away

I sat looking up, Only wanting to hear you say

Don't go, Don't leave, Don't walk away.

But you looked back at me and I knew not today.

My tears would flow, 

But you never would say.

Don't go, Don't leave, Don't walk away.

Reviews

[P.S.Chance]

this sounds like the words to a very sad song ... maybe something in the style of The Fray ... hmmm ... I like it!

[Aurora Dawn]

Thankyou! I'm happy you like it.
The fray is one of my favorite bands, and it's amazing having my writing compared to them.

[P.S.Chance]

that's cool! lol I mean really ... funny I would make that connection and they are a favorite band of yours! keep up the writing!

[Jack Reaper]

short, simple, elegant. allows the mind wander into the possiblities of walking away, and heartbreak on both sides of it. i like it, good job

[Aurora Dawn]

Thankyou so much
I appreciate the review!