A Quest to Sieze All.

I guess I can't have you.

The human eye cannot truly embellish your beauty.
Most say it's only skin deep, but I can read between the pores.
Skin is made up of three distinct layers.
That's why I love all 3 parts of you.
You're beautiful outside and in,
You're beautiful in the mind.
People Magazine voted Kate Hudson most beautiful,
But they're just dumb.
Because in my magazine, I'd vote you my number one.
Everyday you walk by me, i look away.
I want you, but i don't wait for you
How does it feel to want and not have?
My life taken over by a daily lust.
There's nothing in the universe as delicate as you.
I'd like to be the beholder of you.
You say you'd break me, but you're the fragile one.
Because I'd break you into a million f*****g pieces before I am done.
I guess it just feels like s**t, not being good enough for anyone.
So I'll go on a journey through time and space, and burn up in the sun.

Author's Note

Please help me with a good title.

Reviews

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

Darling this is a good title....when it aint broke honey, por favor dont fix it! x0x0x you are very talented... the question should therefore to be you.....why do i phuck with my poems names...lmao...just teasing! but very serious about the titles you have written and i have reviewed....excellent....dont touch! x0 la purrrrr x0x0

[Everything Happens For ..]

I love the "i read between the pores"

excellent write, captures the feeling of unrequited love completely.
xo

[Zach Gordano]

Thanks, man. Most of my poems start off and end completely differently, so I definitely like that as a name.

[John McGrael]

i really like the last line

since its like a love poem, it might not fit
but i'd call it "burn up in the sun", just cause thats an awesome title