what do you see?

i wrote this poem one day for an assignment in English class and i actually ended up liking it alot.

when i look at you

what do i see

hope?

joy?

sadness?

looking through your eyes

i see

myself.

through those pupils

a reflection shows.

but behind them lies something

deeper.

no one can know whats wrong by looking from afar.

but

looking deep in them

you

can find out so much more.

they can speak

so many words

without

making a

sound.

Reviews

[Teenage poet]

Soul movement I feel.

[Dani California]

Yes! The windows to the soul.... !

Nice flow and rythm as well. Very well penned :)
You have talent, that's certain...