My Love is Deprived

I was on the lonely beach with her
She was holding her hand with mine
We walked in sand with our naked feets
Strolling around the sea shore
She is the most important person to me
Her beauty will always smitten me
As beauty stays in the eye of the beholder
She wore a designer white short dress
And beautiful blue hatinator that suited her
Covering her elegant and fragile eye
Flares in her eyes and the way she walkes
Was the most graceful thing that I ever sight
We stopped and saw the beauty of nature
The orange sky and the soothing breeze
The musical waves and the dancing tree
I drew a circle on the sand with my hand
And sat down hugging each other
Till the day that starts to fade away
As night become young and wild
We lay down ourselves in peace
Oh what a marvellous scenery
A breathtaking feast with the stars
Her iris glowed with those in the sky
She pulls my arm and lays her silky hair down
Tingling my senses all over the body
She came closer and closer to me
As I constantly looked at her sparkling face
Her soft finger starts to wander around my space
And she said the three golden words to me
She kissed and I just blinked
I blinked towards my reality
You were never mine
And I could never be yours
As the alarm clock threw me away from my dream
I came back dropping myself on the floor
And started my day with the toothpaste

Author's Note

Hope you enjoy your read

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"I blinked towards my reality
You were never mine
And I could never be yours"

[Sami Khalil]

"She is the most important person to me
Her beauty will always smitten me
As beauty stays in the eye of the beholder
She wore a designer white short dress"

[Sami Khalil]

"A breathtaking feast with the stars
Her iris glowed with those in the sky "

[Jennifer Shaw]

This is lovely! And so bittersweet. I often dream of a darling yound man who will never be mine... he touched my heart and left it abandoned... I dream of him constantly, but I awake disheartened as I assume my daily routine... he's now just a casual friend who's time I am not worth. :'(
This poem touched me, especially the ending. Thank you for sharing. =)

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Ms Jennifer for your generous review towards me. I too felt the same at one point of time but it will eventually heal

[Confuser]

Chang: How could you do that to me? LOL, I was so into this beautiful scene, so lovely and sweet, taken away to the shore, seeing the love shared, and my goodness, when you wrote the three words; I was so happy, the fairy tale had came true and then you blew my mind; the vision slipped away, no you snatched it away. It was my vision, my dream, my fantasy: Thinking of you so happy finding the love of your life. My Love is Deprived is certainly the right title Mr. Man. You know I loved it anyway. Thank you so much. Dale

[Terrence Chang]

My sincere apologies to you Dale for clobbering your imagination with such an abrupt ending. I hope you you have a room to forgive me.
And thank you for your kind review.

[Confuser]

It was a sad moment in my life...Hehehe...thanks;d

[Terrence Chang]

It is just that dreams can be terrible. One moment you are happy and next makes you cry

[Confuser]

I don't remember having a dream...but reading the poem was fun....

[Terrence Chang]

I ment the dream that I had Dale

[Confuser]

I MEANT I don't recall having a DREAM, DREAM, when I sleep...they slip away.....

[Cherry Pepperweb]

Dreams are wonderful to have. :)
Sometimes they even come true!

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Cherry. I wish it comes true for me

[Emily]

Great job on the first lines!
I love it!
Well done!

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Emily for your kind review.

[Jamestown]

Dreams are fantastic, but even better if I hey come true:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much James. I hope it becomes true

[jacob erin-cilberto]

such a sudden awakening to the reality of toothpaste, but only one toothbrush in the cup....

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Jacob for your kind review