REINCARNATION

A day will come
When the sun will turn red and burst
The moon will be in a distant of inclarity
The evolution of human will become extinct
Earth will no longer support any life
The unity of our solar system will disperse

All the boons and curses will be accounted
Our spirits will be strolling around the universe
Our acts and stories will be engraved in the histories
An epitaph about how our earth is decimated
And all achievements has turned into dust

Lining ourselves under path of remorse
Post-mortem of countless creatures
Biotic turns abiotic and now it all rests
A dead telling his stories of life and death
The survival of every life is all gone in vain

Remember them all Remember them all
For now we are all dead and gone
Passed away from this third calibrated dimension
As Armagedon has come to give birth to thee
Destruction of all is always ment to be

But let us not forget the aspects to life
From ashes to ashes and dust to dust
A new fiery phoenix shall be on the rise
Crafting in new avant of space and time
Giving a signals to our spirits to aboard

As mistakes and corrections will cycle again
We will all endure and inquisite life again
Discover things like we all do it everyday
But who knows what have I become by then
An animal or just a spec of dust in some other planet

Author's Note

Hope you enjoy your read and please leave some of your precious reviews to me

Reviews

[Confuser]

This is a phenomenal writing Chang: Smooooooth! Insightful and Enlightening.
Remember them all Remember them all
For now we are all dead and gone
Passed away from this third calibrated dimension
As Armagedon has come to give birth to thee
Destruction of all is always me(a)nt to be
Not a very good writer; huuum; I beg to differ young man. Thank you so much. Dale

[Emily]

Lovely wording!
Well done!

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Emily

[Ana B.]

A very beautiful piece, i seem to see a pattern in your workings (space and universe connected :) ), i love the mention of Phoenix here, the infinite circle or being reborn and then dying and it all starts again some other place....

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you for your gentle and constructive review Ana

[wordman]

the world will always be here my friend, this will be heaven very soon
spirits will receive glorified bodies we will live forever and the un beleivers will be in hell

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much wordman.

[wordman]

you are welcome

[Jamestown]

I don't believe in reincarnation, but very thought provoking
and again so well written! I can see that your writing is definitely taking
a turn toward the writer you want to be, better and better
every single piece, BRAVO! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much James. Thanks for your honest review