Sealing The Fate

In our hope full dreams

We all go against the tide

As we kiss our child

Who is born to die

We question our misfortunes

Scaring our lonely history

The name in us cannot rise

As we speak in profanity

Aiding our acts with vanity

Dishonouring our kinds

With the slaying of all humanity 

It is just a liable curse

That's the thrust of each bullet

In a designed clips

Turns our rusted bodies to dust

Claiming our spots

At the presented graves

Flowers bloom at our shame

Reviews

[Emily]

Great idea for a poem!
Well done!

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you Emily

[wordman]

if it wasn`t for lies,deceit,greed,and man we would have a nice world

[Terrence Chang]

Soo true Word man. Thanks you

[wordman]

your welcome my friend

[Confuser]

Heartwrenching Chang: so packed full of emotions and the reason I feel so much sadness is because your words speak great truth. The poem is perfectly written; The way humanity is today; the way children die in the streets or from war or insanity is terrible. One thought I felt was the chaos in the world - the way children are raised to fight and kill with guns is horrible. Flowers bloom at our shame. Passionate writing. Thank you - Dale

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you Dale. I am nothing but just the seeker of truth. Lies are pleasure and truth is pain. But lies has to go down the drain cause there is no actual gain. Its only an aspirin to bad deed which has side effects.

[Confuser]

I am a Seeker of Truth: and everything else rhymes: I wish you would write that on your bio: That's who you are among many other wonderful qualities: I never liked you writing I am not a very good writer because you are: Say the TRUTH, MY SEEKER FRIEND: Dale

[Jamestown]

Fantastic write! This is really deep, I think this is my favorite from you
so far. The flow is terrific and the message is solid, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much James