Just A Rainy Season

Water in the river

Flowing down the stream

Cold as an ice

Refreshing at the sight

Some of them are evaporated

Into the heights of the cloudy sky

And some of them touches the silt

Into the vast seas and oceans

The first drop awaken my senses

As the last dew rest in my pocket

The leaves shines brightly

Like the emerald placed on earth

The sound of the tidal waves

Make the trees dances to the tunes

You drown the sun and the moon

To show your colors in true form

Oh what a vision

That left the creatures spend

A heavenly season

Author's Note

Enjoy your read

Reviews

[Confuser]

Oh my goodness Chang: was just yesterday researching streams on Wiki. - and I read this! I have to say, this will be a favorite of mine forever and a day. It is phenomenal. Brilliant writing; every words takes me higher: you drown the sun and the moon! Awestruck! Thank you. Bravo. Dale

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Dale. I am extremely happy you came back to writers cafe and reviewed my poem

[Confuser]

Change you are so kind, and I never left. I just don't come as much.

[Lizardo]

The imagination around the poems is really great, you did an awesome job writing this poem terrence.
Its really good!

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you Lizardo

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

A great piece of art, it's a great poem, thanks to share it.

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you Dakir

[Emily]

I love this one!
I just love the idea of this poem and the wording is just great!
Keep it up!

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Emily

[NoahDrake]

Simply beautiful. Great work Terrence

[Terrence Chang]

thanks Noah

[wordman]

a sweet write of nature and natural beauty of the things you feel and see

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you Wordman

[wordman]

yu know your welcome my friend

[Jamestown]

Awesome like always, you have such a smooth flow in your writings. Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!
check out divine communication, thanks again!

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much James. I am on my way to your site