All Hope Is Now Truly Gone In Vain

All Hope Is Now Truly Gone In Vain

A Poem by Terrence Chang

Why are we seeding evil ?
Blasphemy, profanity, vanity
Where is your sanity ?
Scorn with a thorn
Murderers and haters
Put our mind in the incinerator
All hope is gone

Never to cope with what is left
One day of bully
Is enough to send your dead body
With pieces in the trolley
Killing with rage
Like a beast inside a cage
Fangs and claws
Ripping your flesh and jaws
All hope is now gone

Justice is under a piece of paper
Without knowing who are the creepers
Living the life of solitude
Kicking the daylight of your right attitude
Bad deeds comes without a shame
Covering yourself with blame
All hope is now truly gone

Look beyond the mirror
See the ashes flowing down the river
Your body is filled with someone else's blood
But still your thirst
Always make you the first
To steal away for your precious lust

Mind Yourself!!!
If you truly care
Pick your words wisely
Or things will get dicey
Glory is on the top
So pick yourself with ethics
Or get killed by the lunatics
If you care about yourself
Truly don't let it go or else
"ALL HOPE IS NOW TRULY GONE IN VAIN"

© 2014 Terrence Chang


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Great piece of work, wonderful message, I too feel what your saying.
I write things of similar feeling as well,thanks for sharing, b-blessed.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Terrence Chang

9 Years Ago

Thank you Mr James. Thank you for your review. And thanks to Dale also.
it seems you have wrote about our societies and our morals of the times great write
160 million Christians in the world and we are losing a battle because they wont stand up

Posted 9 Years Ago


Terrence Chang

9 Years Ago

Yes but it is not just the Christian but all the people who give humans a bad marks.
 wordman

9 Years Ago

yes,of course
Incredibly powerful delivery!
this could be one of those slam poetry things.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Terrence Chang

9 Years Ago

Thank you Ana for your wonderful review. I am happy you liked it.
This is a fantastic poem. I love it and every word - Wow. What a great message - the rhyming is amazing and something we can all relate to! Truth and honesty, fairness, kindness, empathy; forget the vanity. You are so right. Bravo, Love it. Thank you so much. My favorite!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Terrence Chang

9 Years Ago

Thank you for such a hilarious comment
Confuser

9 Years Ago

Oh, you guys cannot fool me; remember I have older daughters, newphews: you the new Uncle will drive.. read more
Terrence Chang

9 Years Ago

Haha I guess soo Dale
This delivers a very powerful message, and your word use really makes it even more powerful! On a scale of 1 to 10, I give this poem a 59469375489357489359237548439057! Fantastic writing sir! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Terrence Chang

9 Years Ago

Thank you Dan I am truly honoured
DoormanDan

9 Years Ago

Anytime! It's always great to read amazing writing!
Very good piece, great job Terrence.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Terrence Chang

9 Years Ago

Thank you Mr Brian
I feel this is screaming cause and effect but on a moral level of good and bad. But one man's bad is another's good, semantics Etc. Do not fear the dark side because the light can blind you too and if you try you can see in the dark. Polarity, a Paradox etc. Your right if you look in the mirror and see monsters its only yourself misunderstood.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Terrence Chang

9 Years Ago

Your welcome
Yash

9 Years Ago

I like it.
Terrence Chang

9 Years Ago

Thank you Yash

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Added on December 29, 2014
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Tags: hate, blasphemy, rage, vanity, profanity, lunatic, kill, killed

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Terrence Chang
Terrence Chang

Mumbai, Maharashtra , India



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My aim is to be a novel writer and a screen writer. And I try to hone my skills through writing poetry. Everything I did as a writer is all self thought. And I feel that it is time for me to step up t.. more..

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