The Adventure Begins With Me

If you want to succeed
The journey has to proceed
Do your best
And leave the rest

Climb the mountain
And observe the fountain
See the trees
Behind their spree
They are all care free

See the wild animals of desire
But don't get too close to the fire
Feast some on the skewer
As it grills next to the river
That will keep you warm against the shiver

The birds sings in joy
Like they found a new toy
Of that of a little boy
I am in the crest
Of the forest chest
Which allows me to be the best

As I end my successful journey
With the bottle of honey
And my tummy saying yummy
The travel is not over
As adventure begins with me

Author's Note

This was a quickie thought. Please suggest how is it?

Reviews

[wordman]

a journey indeed with all the trimmings and goodies

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you wordman

[wordman]

you are welcome

[Laura Lynn]

crest of the forest chest, Dale has brought this to the fore and I am glad I read it therefore, lest we not give credit where credit belongs

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you Laura

[Khyati]

The journey has ( not have) to proceed
it was cute ^_^ lol

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you so much for correcting my grammatical error Khyati.

[Confuser]

I must say, if this is a quick thought writing, you need to continue. I see many layers and metaphors inside to explore. Not so simple to me, a great journey, I loved many lines, birds, toy, but I am the crest of the forest chest: That's wonderful writing. Wow. Thank you so much Chang.

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much Confuser. Actually I am writing a book base on human psychosis with demonology. The book will be called "Journey to Emptiness". All my main thought is going on that. I hope to get it published by the mids of 2015

[Confuser]

Sorry, cannot read more, popups on certain words, in this case read more. Good luck, certain you will do a great job.

[Terrence Chang]

Ok will do

[Confuser]

Have a great day!

[Terrence Chang]

You too have a great day

[Confuser]

This merry go round again...........................Dale:

[Chris Kay]

Simple... but that's a good thing. I liked it, I found it encouraging. I don't know how, but I believe the simplicity of it actually adds to it's encouraging-ness (I couldn't think of another way to say that).

Anyway, nice.

[Terrence Chang]

Thank you soo much