wow! how beautiful a tribute .. to artists and the use of sonnet form .. i appreciate the effort to perfect a sonnet as they are not in my tool box ..and have written just a few and always with the guidance of our friend Richard .. so i will not even get into dissecting the form .. i just let it take me on its rhythmic ride and delight in rhyme .. and you use everyday language ..not yielding to the temptation of ye olde English ;) well done! i am now headed to youtube to enjoy the music ... wonderful tribute Tamara!
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Posted 4 Years Ago
1 Year Ago
Well, your reply is greatly appreciated. Sorry I've taken so long, but have been sick and also don'.. read moreWell, your reply is greatly appreciated. Sorry I've taken so long, but have been sick and also don't write too much anymore. Thanks again! :-)
1 Year Ago
my prayers and hope is for your healthy recovery ... i don't write lately either but have not given .. read moremy prayers and hope is for your healthy recovery ... i don't write lately either but have not given up yet! blessings of hope and joy!
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Classical music is not really my area of expertise, but I have been recently introduced to the music of Yanni, so your poem does register on that level. From what i have heard so far, the music is quite stunning.
As a piece of writing, your sonnet hits all the right notes. True to the form and written on a very original theme, very different to the usual objects of beauty that Sonnet's are usually written in praise of. Kudos for that originality. Something in short supply on this site in my opinion.
Overall, another fine poetic write. The Sonnet is a difficult form to master and you have done very well here.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Thank you Doodley. Yes, the sonnet is difficult and takes a great deal of patience. One has to rea.. read moreThank you Doodley. Yes, the sonnet is difficult and takes a great deal of patience. One has to really be motivated to write one. Lately, I'm not.