A Midnight Walk

No stellar night sky can compare

To your long enchanting black hair

The moon is jealous of your radiance 

Venus tries to ignore your elegance

Nebulas now appear too dull

Your aura, the most colorful

Your eyes are like a vast black hole

Consuming all, my entire soul

You are the solar wind that makes me dance

Like the aurora, such a sublime trance

The most graceful comet you are

My compass points to you, my star

I'm stuck here on the lonely ground

Wishing for you to come around

Super Novas explode in my small mind

They're thoughts of you, the most beautiful kind

I miss the way we used to talk 

Memories of a midnight walk

Reviews

[Dhaye]

A nice tribute to the "star of your midnight life". It's nice to walk with someone. You have someone to talk to while you are walking along this complicated road. When that companion stopped walking and reach to her/his destination, you will be left alone walking. And that's sad.

It's still good to reminisce sweet memoirs of these "midnight walks" with someone.

Slightly moving but written beautifully. =)

[Trevor Barnett]

Thats all I have is the memories when I'm walking this road. Thank you for wonderful comment Dhaye!

[Dhaye]

You're welcome.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

the rhyme scheme...
and the dedication of a write...
the words seem to endlessly...
give in to the person being admired here...

[Trevor Barnett]

Thank you very much for the wonderful review! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...

[Rose Diamond]

Your work always leaves me speechless, my friend! The emotion you put into this work seeps right into my heart and makes me feel the sadness, the love, and the tragedy the narrator feels. This has definitely become one of my favourites!

[Trevor Barnett]

Thank you so much Rosie! I really do try lol, I'm kind of new at this. Your works have lots emotion and leaves me contemplating.

[Rose Diamond]

Haha, if you're new to poem writing, then I must say that you are so much better than I was when I first began! :P And I'm glad you enjoy my work, though sometimes I think I need to lighten up the mood for some of mine xD

[Trevor Barnett]

Well thank you Rosie:) Nah, the most emotional poems are some the best in history!

[love, lorey]

What a sweet bit of magic ;) Very well done, Trevor!

[Sami Khalil]

A very sweet and lovely poem. You make things seem magical...:)......................

[Trevor Barnett]

Much appreciated Sami!!!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..................

[Bob Sherunkle]

Trevor,that was stunning.I'm not much of a lover of love(you may have noticed),but I really appreciate a beautiful poem when I read one.

[Trevor Barnett]

Well, thank you Bob!!!

[Bob Sherunkle]

Your welcome.Always enjoy your work.

[MsJewel]

To compare the one you love to the midnight sky - wow...now this is a love poem sighs were made for. Absolutely stunning.

:) Julie

[Trevor Barnett]

Well thank you very much Julie:) Send me some of your best writes, please.

[Winter Renee Vineyard]

This is so beautiful and well expressed! Amazing job!

[Trevor Barnett]

Thank you!!! send your best writes.

[funsized fairy]

This is a beautiful poem. i love how you compare your muse to the night sky

[Trevor Barnett]

Thank you! I'm glad you all liked it.