A Midnight Walk

A Midnight Walk

A Poem by Trevor Barnett


No stellar night sky can compare
To your long enchanting black hair
The moon is jealous of your radiance 
Venus tries to ignore your elegance
Nebulas now appear too dull
Your aura, the most colorful

Your eyes are like a vast black hole
Consuming all, my entire soul
You are the solar wind that makes me dance
Like the aurora, such a sublime trance
The most graceful comet you are
My compass points to you, my star

I'm stuck here on the lonely ground
Wishing for you to come around
Super Novas explode in my small mind
They're thoughts of you, the most beautiful kind
I miss the way we used to talk 
Memories of a midnight walk


© 2013 Trevor Barnett


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A nice tribute to the "star of your midnight life". It's nice to walk with someone. You have someone to talk to while you are walking along this complicated road. When that companion stopped walking and reach to her/his destination, you will be left alone walking. And that's sad.

It's still good to reminisce sweet memoirs of these "midnight walks" with someone.

Slightly moving but written beautifully. =)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trevor Barnett

10 Years Ago

Thats all I have is the memories when I'm walking this road. Thank you for wonderful comment Dhaye!
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

You're welcome.



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the rhyme scheme...
and the dedication of a write...
the words seem to endlessly...
give in to the person being admired here...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trevor Barnett

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the wonderful review! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Glen Yumang Manese

10 Years Ago

you're welcome...
A nice tribute to the "star of your midnight life". It's nice to walk with someone. You have someone to talk to while you are walking along this complicated road. When that companion stopped walking and reach to her/his destination, you will be left alone walking. And that's sad.

It's still good to reminisce sweet memoirs of these "midnight walks" with someone.

Slightly moving but written beautifully. =)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trevor Barnett

10 Years Ago

Thats all I have is the memories when I'm walking this road. Thank you for wonderful comment Dhaye!
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

You're welcome.
Your work always leaves me speechless, my friend! The emotion you put into this work seeps right into my heart and makes me feel the sadness, the love, and the tragedy the narrator feels. This has definitely become one of my favourites!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trevor Barnett

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Rosie! I really do try lol, I'm kind of new at this. Your works have lots emotion .. read more
Rose Diamond

10 Years Ago

Haha, if you're new to poem writing, then I must say that you are so much better than I was when I f.. read more
Trevor Barnett

10 Years Ago

Well thank you Rosie:) Nah, the most emotional poems are some the best in history!
What a sweet bit of magic ;) Very well done, Trevor!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very sweet and lovely poem. You make things seem magical...:)......................

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trevor Barnett

10 Years Ago

Much appreciated Sami!!!
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)..................
Trevor,that was stunning.I'm not much of a lover of love(you may have noticed),but I really appreciate a beautiful poem when I read one.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trevor Barnett

10 Years Ago

Well, thank you Bob!!!
Bob Sherunkle

10 Years Ago

Your welcome.Always enjoy your work.
To compare the one you love to the midnight sky - wow...now this is a love poem sighs were made for. Absolutely stunning.

:) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trevor Barnett

10 Years Ago

Well thank you very much Julie:) Send me some of your best writes, please.
This is so beautiful and well expressed! Amazing job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trevor Barnett

10 Years Ago

Thank you!!! send your best writes.
This is a beautiful poem. i love how you compare your muse to the night sky

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trevor Barnett

10 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you all liked it.

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Trevor Barnett

Glencoe, AL



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My name is Trevor Barnett; and, writing is a hobby of mine. My true passion is art; that being said, I will be attending Savannah School of Art and Design(SCAD) this fall for animation. If there's any.. more..

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