THE NEED

 

 

Kiss me
like you are hungry to reach inside
and draw me into you

Touch me
like you ache to feel me beneath you
and show me your fire

and love me
like you've never loved before
with the measure of your soul

then I will always be yours

 

Reviews

[B. Boileau]

Wow firerie words ! you minx
You keep that up and Terry won't let me read any more of your stuff
BTW... Thank you again for showing me here.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

This is so beautiful , sensual poem . :)

[Adrian K. Smith]

An interesting take on conditional love. I have seen a few here and there, but none of them have quite said it like this.

[Butterflymom]

beautiful poem!

[myshel (fefee to some)]

ahhhhh i love the opening to this...a kiss with depth... to touch you inside... instincual, primal... soul connection... excellent write

[Silvia - Scribo, Ergo S..]

Longing, yearning, passion, hunger ... splendid! xxx

[Creepy Swine Guy]

Your poem burns. But I wonder if love is at all physical? Or is love about perseverence? Is love something so deep that it cannot be seen or felt on a physical plane?

[S. P. Vaporis]

Short and sweet yet big on emotion and want. PERFECT!

[James K. Blaylock]

this one is aflame with passion. love that ending. keep up the great writes.

[Ale Blevins]

Great poem very touching! very romantic and very beautiful! I love it!