Negative Thoughts

Negative Thoughts

A Poem by T

So complicated

just when you think it's going well

they remind you

slap you in the head

sit on your shoulder

and whisper in your ear

 

So effortless

to let the weeds take over

bury themselves

choke the flowers

snuff the good thoughts

confuse reality

 

Such an effort

to grasp the insignifigance

of the negative

gain perspective

erase the pattern

and start again

 

© 2011 T


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Wow...this means a lot to me. You pegged it perfectly. Anyone who has ever battled with negativity knows this all to well. Excellent!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful with optemistic end :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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