Anecdote

Anecdote

A Poem by What happened to simple old me?
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If I had chosen this to be of a religious genre, I'm almost sure I would go to hell.

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Now you listen to my life, and tell me where there lies a line. Between your truths and my failures. By far have you underestimated the lies that deceive you; every moment is a day dream, where you elapse my meaning. Every glance is a misconception of my thoughts entangled in your mind. I will take this the way I want, and you will follow, strewn behind.

© 2011 What happened to simple old me?


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. brilliant ... all of it ... but this i like a lot ... i go through this all the time with someone ...

"Every glance is a misconception of my thoughts entangled in your mind."

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really like this, I sort of interpret it as, nobody can ever understand exactly how another person feels, however close they are. I'm not sure if that is what you had in mind but that's what I got from it. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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What happened to simple old me?
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'Death was just a simple glance across a dim lit room And those eyes did it Those three words did it Those three words killed him And I surrender to it all Between you and me, I surrender to you .. more..

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