Lesserse

Lesserse

A Poem by What happened to simple old me?

We're discordant. A kite stuck in the wind, while rainy plummets fall.

You tear me one way, I another go. I'll spin a web around myself

to hide from your light. Gradually sinking from your obsessive, collective behaviour.

Different devices in the world play part; you and I, divergent.   

© 2011 What happened to simple old me?


Author's Note

What happened to simple old me?
I guess this piece can interpret two relationships. Lovers, if read with the word 'obsessive,' - or friends if it is removed.

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"I'll spin a web around myself
to hide from your light. "

. love that image ... and yes ... it can be interpreted in the ways you mention ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


deep write, makes one ponder.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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