Forever

Let the sunrise come again
as you lay still in my arms
Another night's sky passed us by just yesterday
though time will not run out
we've 'til forever, you and I.

Let your tears fall over my palm
no need to explain with words
We've come to here with an understanding
one that will not be lost
we've 'til forever, you and I.

Let me lay in the shade
while you worry not
The winds will take worries away from us
those that burden love
we've 'til forever, you and I.

Let me take you somewhere
far from all that you've seen
A place of renewal and peace
where we'll take forever
you, and I.

Reviews

[OT]

"let your tears fall over my palm no need to explain with words" - as if words are unnecessary - the action is everything - it's true love - "we've til forever" - time will not intervene - a lovely ode! nice!

[Viki Rachel]

How terribly romantic! I'm fallling in love with the idea of this simple romance. I haven't read a love poem this good--on this website--ever.
Added to my favorites.

[Wondering Mind]

That forever!