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when he said to bring you, I never thought he'd be right..
the reason, the cause. so only tonight, have I realised
the conflict of the bleak heartless foaming, vomited up-thrust
that made my chesty blacks. 

© 2010 What happened to simple old me?


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I need to think on this one.
I am not sure what the last line means.

the rest of it seems like an invitation to a bring a friend you are not sure will be welcomed to whereever you're going.

the reason and cause for alarming discomfort to the point that you have been made ill by it.....but you're, somehow, still drawn to the idea.

interesting.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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What happened to simple old me?
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'Death was just a simple glance across a dim lit room And those eyes did it Those three words did it Those three words killed him And I surrender to it all Between you and me, I surrender to you .. more..

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