Sky;Pe Part 2

Sky;Pe Part 2

A Poem by What happened to simple old me?

She said, 'I'm writing - or reading, the same,' to which the reply 
came from eager request to push over boundaries, of their knowing
relation, too many times before. She hides. With a simple level, of lust
for her, to become.. close
to him, never previous has any other man, if at all a man. Just. 
'Writing, you write?' 
'I write'
'What do you write'
some, mundane conversation, nothing of intellectuals.
So how long until interest fades? At the time, prevailing, how long should she wait
or how long does she anticipate, he'll hold on..
'I write.. whatever comes to mind. It's, it's really nothing.'
'nothing? Can I see then, if it's, nothing?' 
How harsh denial strikes the poor, needy
fervent collapsed weed, 'maybe tomorrow,' 
only an answer to despondent for his.. need.. 

© 2010 What happened to simple old me?


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interesting....sad a little

I love the awkward feel of the conversation....It's almost as if it was said: 'I can fly' or 'I have a mouth where my navel should be'...........I don't know why....it just struck me as wonderfully awkward. Then 'maybe tomorrow'. nice. the lovely brush off. this was cool....dark in a strange way. cheers!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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interesting....sad a little

I love the awkward feel of the conversation....It's almost as if it was said: 'I can fly' or 'I have a mouth where my navel should be'...........I don't know why....it just struck me as wonderfully awkward. Then 'maybe tomorrow'. nice. the lovely brush off. this was cool....dark in a strange way. cheers!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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