I have this new obsession with picking up the piece of paper and jotting down the first things that come to mind (aka typing on my keyboard) - random non-sense combinations, they're pretty fun to write, or to laugh at ;D
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I think its great that you write what comes to mind, usually it means nothing, or it means a great deal, what ever it means its real, and nothing to laugh at, although I tend to do the same, I love spontaneity, I use it all the time in my sculpture, I shall have a read, and review, so far I see a lot of similar stuff between us, thanks for your comments, Back soon, C.
'Death was just a simple glance across a dim lit room
And those eyes did it
Those three words did it
Those three words killed him
And I surrender to it all
Between you and me, I surrender to you
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