Thank you

should I wear a sinful smile when I prayed for it

and I'm healed in time, my body did not grant me that

wishing, of no one else to know, our little secret,

perfect resilience doubting of others

who can't see, with understanding filtering

through veins and,

they're waiting again

for coping to dismantle with every hour

inside each of these days

found captive, the retched

aching, eager once more,

you know you'll have that moment again

sometime soon; it's a game of waiting

blood-flowing paining. collapsed 

outside our door, that makes you feel

so strong-er   

Reviews

[Jonathan De Elvira]

perfect resilience doubting of others"...I love that sentence mate, it holds a hidden meaning within it.
Correct me if I'm wrong but this poem had the sense of love hate relationship...
and you pin point the flow very well...
nicely done..

[Wondering Mind]

so they knew each other deeply