We cried

We cried

A Poem by What happened to simple old me?

they do the same to us all,
sweet neglecting rejection of 
love does not appear in this place
of sorrow and dank surround,
thick walls suffocating for escape
embrace the move
one day we'll be out. 

© 2010 What happened to simple old me?


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Giving me a little claustrophobia...sad write more out of frustration and the want to fly, but sad nonetheless.

Posted 14 Years Ago


this really does close in on one's chest....I need some air now

Posted 14 Years Ago



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What happened to simple old me?
What happened to simple old me?

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