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Do you f*****g feel the blood I feel

the gorgeous crimson thins

of liquid love that cry out from my skin

so fresh, so young.

Do you see or feel the pain I lust

that once before you gave.

If I let you in to tear me down

then there's no need to feel so grave.

My love now what you did to me

is nothing when compared

to what I can inflict myself

if you saw, would you despair.

Though I forgot you don't do love,

nor feelings ever cast you down.

So walk away as times before

displayed no small appeal. 

Reviews

[Nobody.]

Slashing write! Cuts deep. The break from smooth flow at the end is like a brick wall. another good one.
cheers!

[Wondering Mind]

that was a ripper of a starting stanza...Raw, calming down to realization of an inevitable