Not all is lost in this game <3

Not all is lost in this game <3

A Poem by What happened to simple old me?

Where love is lost you will not lose, all hope falls down from somewhere, you are not the first to fall, my love, if you just hold on, to all you have, all you want and need, then darling it shall not escape, not as much as the time it did before. For we can't have all in the world, and we have to learn these things from somewhere.
I know how much you wanted that, but turning away from it all for your want, is that really the way to go? Even if it seems so impossible to carry on, just find the tune to get you through, replay it over, fall in love with the sound and let it carry you on. To better things you will go, my sweet, if only you knew. Back then, what I went through, the same as you and all you will, don't despair, I won't find you there, but I know you'll find me here. 

© 2010 What happened to simple old me?


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I read this twice, it's really quite enchanting. I love the ideas here: we love and we lose, but we will find a way to move on. Music is a powerful thing. When you're in love, every song reminds you of them and when they're gone it can get you through. I love the last line, like you are reaching out to all those who have lost love and telling them they will find themselves in your position soon enough, a place of happiness and content. It's so relatable and worded eloquently. Thanks for sharing :)

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What happened to simple old me?
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